“Oh don’t,” she said, “it's cold.”

“Oh don’t,” she said, “it's cold.”

*With my mother, Nov. 22, 2012.

“ I’m depressed

I’m old,”

I held her hand

“Oh don’t” she said,

“It's cold.”

 She said:

“Maybe I was aggressive

Maybe too passive

Perhaps it was something

That I needed to be told.”

I held her hand

“Oh don’t ,” she said

“it's cold.”

I said:

“But we love you,

What we once bought

Has now long been sold.”

I held her hand

“ Oh don’t,”  she said

“it's cold.”

She said:

“ What should I have seen?”

“What was I meant to be?”

“What could of pleasured me?”

I held her hand

“Too bad” she said

“it's warm now", but

“  oh, so old.”

Her hands

Gently broke

from me

And like spotted moths,

fluttered free.

Evaluation of Draft One

DANGER

DAVID ROPEIK TALKS ABOUT THE RATIONAL APPROACH VS. THE IRRATIONAL APPROACH TO DANGER. EXPLAIN WHAT HE MEANS BY THESE  DIFFERENT APPROACHES. USE YOUR OWN EXPERIENCE TO ILLUMINATE YOUR EXPLANATION, AS WELL AS EXAMPLES FROM THE ESSAY.

Incorporating quotes)

When you directly quote the works of others in your paper, you will format quotations differently depending on their length. Below are some basic guidelines for incorporating quotations into your paper. Please note that all pages in MLA should be double-spaced.

Short Quotations

To indicate short quotations (four or fewer typed lines of prose or three lines of verse) in your text, enclose the quotation within double quotation marks. Provide the author and specific page citation (in the case of verse, provide line numbers) in the text, and include a complete reference on the Works Cited page. Punctuation marks such as periods, commas, and semicolons should appear after the parenthetical citation. Question marks and exclamation points should appear within the quotation marks if they are a part of the quoted passage but after the parenthetical citation if they are a part of your text.
For example, when quoting short passages of prose, use the following examples
:

According to some, dreams express "profound aspects of personality" (Foulkes 184), though others disagree.

 

According to Foulkes's study, dreams may express "profound aspects of personality" (184).

 

Is it possible that dreams may express "profound aspects of personality" (Foulkes 184)?

 

When short (fewer than three lines of verse) quotations from poetry, mark breaks in short quotations of verse with a slash, /, at the end of each line of verse (a space should precede and follow the slash).

Cullen concludes, "Of all the things that happened there / That's all I remember" (11-12).

Long Quotations

For quotations that extend to more than four lines of verse or prose, place quotations in a free-standing block of text and omit quotation marks. Start the quotation on a new line, with the entire quote indented one inch from the left margin; maintain double-spacing. Only indent the first line of the quotation by an additional quarter inch if you are citing multiple paragraphs. Your parenthetical citation should come after the closing punctuation mark. When quoting verse, maintain original line breaks. (You should maintain double-spacing throughout your essay.)
For example, when citing more than four lines of prose, use the following examples:

Nelly Dean treats Heathcliff poorly and dehumanizes him throughout her narration:

 

"They entirely refused to have it in bed with them, or even in their room, and I had no more sense, so, I put it on the landing of the stairs, hoping it would be gone on the morrow. By chance, or else attracted by hearing his voice, it crept to Mr. Earnshaw's door, and there he found it on quitting his chamber. Inquiries were made as to how it got there; I was obliged to confess, and in recompense for my cowardice and inhumanity was sent out of the house. (Bronte 78)"

 

 

When citing long sections (more than three lines) of poetry, keep formatting as close to the original as possible.

In his poem "My Papa's Waltz," Theodore Roethke explores his childhood with his father:

 

The whiskey on your breath
Could make a small boy dizzy;
But I hung on like death:
Such waltzing was not easy.
We Romped until the pans
Slid from the kitchen shelf;
My mother's countenance
Could not unfrown itself. (quoted in Shrodes, Finestone, Shugrue 202)

Bartleby's Problem

Bartleby, in Bartleby the Scrivener by Herman Melville, refuses to work by answering all requests to work from his employer with, "I prefer not to."  The reason Bartleby refuses to work is because of his employer, the Lawyer, who tolerates his insubordination. A solution to this problem would be to have the Lawyer, hire a professional manager to handle the day to day office affairs.

 Bartleby, after starting out as an excellent employee eventually starts to refuse to work....

  Then show evidence from the book.

The Lawyer unreasonably tolerates this behavior which contributes to his refusal to work.

 

Show evidence from the book...

One way to handle Barlteby's refusal to work is for the Lawyer to hire a professional manager for day to day operations.  Write a bit about your solution

The Double Cheese Burger

Make the reader see, feel, smell and taste this burger

QUIZ QUESTION ON THE MAN IN THE BOOTH IN THE MIDTOWN TUNNEL

 

 

 

MUCH HAS BEEN WRITTEN ABOUT FOOD IN THE MAN IN THE BOOTH IN THE MIDTOWN TUNNEL. IN YOUR VIEW WHAT DOES FOOD REPRESENT IN THE POETRY COLLECTION? IS IT AN EROTIC SYMBOL? DOES IT HELP DEFINE RELATIONSHIPS? YOU CAN WRITE ABOUT WHATEVER YOU WANT. BUT MAKE SURE TO HAVE A THESIS, QUOTE LIBERALLY FROM THE BOOK, AND HAVE AN INTRO PARAGRAPH, TWO BODY PARAGRAPHS, AND A CONCLUSION.