Tom Brady Thesis

INTRODUCTION:

•Thesis:____Tom Brady deflated  the football during the playoff  game with the Colts because of his win at any cost philosophy. ____Brady knew it would be a rainy day and he wanted to make sure he could grip the ball better. He deflated the ball even though he knew it was against the NFL   rules.____________________________________________.

II. BODY PARAGRAPH 1:

•Opening Sentence:_____Brady’s win at any cost philosophy made him disregard NFL rules.______________________________________.

•Detail 1:_____The NFL rule is……_______________________________________________.

•Detail 2:__Brady stated to a Globe reporter that he would sell his own brother down the river in order to win a game.__________________________________________________.

•Detail 3:____________________________________________________.

III. BODY PARAGRAPH II:

•Transition/Opening  Sentence:____Brady realized his performance would suffer during a rainy day, so in order to win he put his finger up to the rules._____________________________.

•Detail 1:___Brady’s record in the rain…_________________________________________________.

•Detail 2:______Explanation of why a deflated football is more effective under these conditions.______________________________________________.

•Detail 3:____________________________________________________.


VI. CONCLUSION:

•Reconfirmed Thesis:___Because of Tom Brady’s win at all cost philosophy, he deflated  11 footballs and flouted NFL rules.______________________________________.